The Story

As my audience gets larger, it’s important that I reexplain what this blog is about.  This blog is obviously about sharing my experiences as an author/blogger.  Most of my posts are about how we can become better writers and bloggers.

But this blog is also about Elithius.  Elithius is the fantasy series that I’m writing; it had previously been called The Golden Lands, but I decided to change the name because I thought Elithius was a cooler name.

So, what’s Elithius about?

Here’s my logline:

John Hedekira and his friends must track and rescue Cassie and Luke, John’s little sister and brother, before they can be taken and sacrificed to the God of Death by Nirak, the Red Captain.


That’s the initial plot.  But to go into more detail…

John Hedekira is the main character of this series.  Quite unexpectedly, his home is raided by a band of Evil–mysterious, unearthly creatures–and the Evil kidnap his siblings and leave him for dead.  John survives the encounter, however, is determined to rescue his siblings and get revenge.

The thing is, there’s a time limit; John must save his siblings–Cassie and Luke–before they can be sacrificed to the God of Death.

Saving Cassie and Luke is far from simple.  As John chases the Evil, he makes friends, but loyalties are tested and betrayal is in the air.  His desire for vengeance grows stronger.  A mysterious ghost is discovered to be hunting him.  And even Death itself will try to ensnare John.

John and his friends have to fight with every ounce they have in order to overcome trial after trial.

Can John and his friends rescue Cassie and Luke in time, in spite of these obstacles?  And who will they be when all is said and done?

This is the story I wrote.  I really hope you guys enjoy it when it’s ready!  In case you haven’t noticed, I’ve been posting a little less, but that’s just because I’m trying to finish revising the novel.  Thanks again for all your support!

What do you think of my story?  Does it sound interesting?  Is this a book you would want to read?

11 thoughts on “The Story”

  1. It sounds like an interesting story, but personally, I’m more into fantasy romance with some action. However, I can read anything for beta reading and book reviews.


    1. It should be finished in a few weeks. I’ll be done editing soon, but my cover artist wants to format my book so that she can practice doing that for other authors. I’m so happy that you’re excited!!

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      1. Awesome! Congrats on being so close to finishing. And yeah, formatting is…a pain haha. Can’t wait to see your finished work

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  2. Sounds awesome!! I’ve never been one for a ton of fantasy, but the cover looks awesome enough and it sounds cool enough I’d probably try it out. 😀

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    1. Thanks! I’d say the target age group is like ages 14-30. The characters are in their mid/late teens, so teens would like it, but I think generally anyone could enjoy it so long as you like fantasy.

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