TO BE WRITTEN Character tip #2

Our first character tip was BE BOLD.

We all want our main characters to stand out and be unique.  Who wants to simply copy one character from another story?  That’s no fun.  And it won’t make us feel proud of ourselves.  Sure, characters from other stories can INSPIRE the characters in our own stories…but they shouldn’t be exactly the same.

Similarly, being bold means being pronounced and having a sense of identity.  Nobody likes a character that is wishy-washy and, in essence, has no character.

Which brings me to Character Tip #2

Tip #2: Have integrity

Have you ever read a book where one character makes a decision that is TOTALLY against…well, his or her character?

It’s like if the Balrog started gushing about how much he loves puppies.

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MY PUPPIEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!

Essentially, we must make sure that our characters keep in character.  Sure, characters can change in the same way that real-live people can.  There’s nothing wrong with that…it’s realistic!  But what happens when characters are ALWAYS changing?  Grumpy here, selfless in this scene, a bully in another…it just doesn’t make sense.

If your character doesn’t have integrity, make sure you give the reader a good explanation as to why.  Maybe the hero of the story is having a rough day, and THAT’S why he acts like a jerk…that makes sense.  But if the hero suddenly just decides to act like a jerk, for no good reason other than, say, to advance the plot?  Uh, no.

Have integrity.


So the next book in my fantasy series, Elithius, is coming out in December.  If you haven’t already, check out Book One of Elithius here.  I promise, you won’t be disappointed.

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Cover art by Elizabeth M

 

9 thoughts on “TO BE WRITTEN Character tip #2”

  1. This is really good advice. People will accept a character who is a jerk, but not a character who is a jerk in one scene and then not in the next and then back to being a jerk again without any kind of reasoning. Thanks for sharing.

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  2. The fun part is when you’re so deep into your character creation that you know how they would respond without really thinking about it. Then you find yourself in autopilot mode and then suddenly they surprise you! Your plan no longer works because you realise it’s not actually in character lol

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  3. MY PUPPIIIIIIIIES!!
    That cracked me up. 😆

    Also, this is great advice! Each character have their own personality, and sometimes I get so into writing that the characters end up spinning the story on their own, which is always fun. 😀

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