Here’s my log-line!
John Hedekira and his friends must track and rescue Cassie and Luke, John’s little sister and brother, before they can be taken and sacrificed to the God of Death by Nirak, the Red Captain.
And it all takes place in the universe of Elithius, within the realms of three worlds: The Golden Lands, the Gray Lands, and the Dark Lands!
The Golden Lands 
Really cool! It has just the right amount of mystery to it. I love the whole, “you must defeat the evil within yourself.”
LikeLike
Thanks Elizabeth! I’m glad you’re interested.
LikeLike
“My parents always said that there were Evil in these lands.”
I love this. Makes the reader recognize that Evil is a being, and not an action or just simply an basic opposition.
LikeLike
Haha thanks. But i wouldn’t say that, philosophically, “evil” is a being. Evil is a lack of goodness. It’s hard to be a “being” when you’re “empty space in something”, so to speak.
This is more like personification of evil. But it is meant to sound dark and epic. I’m glad you like it 🙂
Aul
LikeLike
It’s a good prologue. Lots of mystery and intrigue. I’m looking forward to more.
LikeLike
Thanks! That means a lot to hear that.
Aul
LikeLike
Sounds very intriguing! Makes me want to read more! Well done.
LikeLike
Awesome! Thanks so much. I’ll be self-publishing very soon, so stick around!
Aul
LikeLiked by 1 person
I look forward to it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lots of secrecy and questions abound. Interesting how he doesn’t give any names…he just keeps it very simple. I would definitely want to read more.
LikeLike
Why thank you! That’s exactly what i’ve been wanting to hear. Stick around, because I’ll be publishing very soon!
Aul
LikeLike
Wow, this is really intriguing! It’s evocative and really leaves people wondering 😀
LikeLike
Thanks! I’m glad you liked it. Just so you know, the book is on sale at a discount price for only one more week.
Aul
LikeLiked by 1 person
I really enjoyed this! These are the types of books I enjoy. Mystery, secrecy, family, and hardships. I like reading about characters who are struggling and see how they deal with their obstacles. And that unnamed “Him” really has me intrigued, as well as he Evil!
LikeLike
Wow I guess I hit the spot 😛 Thanks!!!!
Just so you know, the book is for sale at a discount price for only one more week.
Thanks again!
Aul
LikeLiked by 1 person
I will have to take a look then! Good luck with it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks!
Aul
LikeLike
Loved the depth hidden in the story, and the various interpretations it may provoke! Congrats!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks!! I’m glad to hear it. Just so you know, my book is on sale only until monday, if you’re interested.
LikeLike
Have you thought of publishing more on here or a short story, etc.? I already read this and liked it, but not sure about buying the book. Not my genre, but I have enjoyed reading. lily
LikeLike
Thanks for the comment, Lily! The only other thing that I’ve really “published” on my blog would be the blog series I’m working on. You can find it by clicking the sidebar button on the left and clicking the one entitled “Soul Bleeder”.
Thanks!
Aul
LikeLike
Really interesting read, love your writing style 🙂 Just a suggestion, you could consider posting maybe just the first one or two chapters here as well, just the prologue wouldn’t be enough to hook most readers!
LikeLike
Thanks! And okay, that’s definitely doable. Thanks for stopping by and I hope I see you again.
Aul
LikeLike
I think that the ending is very good as It causes the reader to want to know more about ‘him’ and the evilness that consumes one.
LikeLike
Thank you! I’m glad you liked it. Thanks for stopping by and I hope you drop by again.
Aul
LikeLike
This was really captivating. Great work!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Awesome! I’m glad you liked it.
Aul
LikeLike
You da man, man…go for it!
LikeLike
Haha 🙂
LikeLike
Looking forward to getting the chance to read the next part, Aul. You have a great way of writing, really intriguing. 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you very much! I actually won’t be posting any more parts to my blog, but Volume 1 is free as an eBook version. I believe I included a link to where you can download Volume 1 (the “Click here” link).
Thanks for dropping by! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
LikeLike